Neko's Manga Tutorials 1 Pretty Good
That was pretty well done. I liked your choice of music too.(from final fantasy 3/6 if i'm not mistaken) there were a few minor issues with the timing of some of the words. maybe that's just how it ran on my computer but some times there wasn't enough time to read what was on there. Also if you could get the next link to stay in approxamitly the same place every time. it seemed a little bit awkward having to look for the link every time.
I really liked your stlye though. The whole one stroke at a time/showing the drawing. Very creative and orginal. Can't wait to see more of this in the future.